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Cinquain: Five Lines, One Image

Cinquain: Five Lines, One Image

A five-line poem with a fixed syllable count and nothing else fixed: 2, 4, 6, 8, 2. The shape widens and then snaps shut. Because the last line is the shortest in the poem, it lands with more force than its two syllables should carry.

Form
Cinquain
Lines
5
Metre
five lines, syllable count 2 / 4 / 6 / 8 / 2
Date

Specimen: an original cinquain, 2 / 4 / 6 / 8 / 2 syllables

Black ice on the whole path, and my father's hand held out behind him, not looking back, for me

The shape does the work

Two syllables barely fit a noun and an article. Four fit a small prepositional phrase. Six and eight fit a clause with a subject and a verb. Two again fit one word, or a word and a name. So the sequence is: thing, setting, action, complication, verdict.

The specimen follows exactly that: black ice (thing), on the whole path (setting), and my father's hand held (action), out behind him, not looking back (complication), for me (verdict). The last line is two syllables and it is the only line in the poem that is not about the ice. That is the snap.

Why it is often taught badly

School versions of the cinquain usually come with a required grammar: line 1 a noun, line 2 two adjectives, line 3 three verbs, line 4 a sentence, line 5 a synonym of line 1. That is not the form. It is a worksheet built on top of the form, and it produces five lines that say the same thing five ways.

The original form, as published by Adelaide Crapsey in 1915, specifies only the syllable count and a preference for the short final line. Everything else is yours. Keep the count; throw away the part-of-speech recipe.

Counting, and where the count can flex

Count syllables as they are actually spoken, not as they are spelled. Black ice is two. Whole is one. Father's is two. Counting the specimen: 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 — it lands exactly. If a line comes out one syllable long and reads better that way, keep it and accept that the poem is a near-cinquain; Crapsey's own drafts bend the count more often than the published versions suggest.

Terms used in this entry
cinquain五行诗
Any five-line poem; the syllable-count version is the American cinquain.
catalectic line缺尾行
A line missing a syllable or foot at the end, which is why a short last line sounds abrupt.
image意象
A concrete thing presented so the reader perceives it rather than being told about it.
volta转折
The turn in an argument; in a cinquain it usually falls on the last two syllables.